Hear, hear...now that sounds familiar to me, my friend!
A very good poem and a true message for some..

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow CJ. Really good poem. I really liked it. The flow was AWESOME.

What a great poem CJ :]
You spoke of the hurt.. of not being comfortable within yourself.. and that really came through to me in this line:

Like a stranger in your own bones
^^ This was SO original.. i really loved it.. Its a line that i will remember for a long time.. it was very good. Well done.

The strongest pain is when you your tears flow
^^
You say, you your.. that doesnt make sense. So, i would probably change it to something like:
The strongest pain is when your tears flow.

But overall it was a fantastic poem and i really loved it.
It related to my own issues a little, so it really kept me reading till the end.
Great flow and rhyme too :)
5/5