Excellent poem perfect actually each word
i totally relate to. these demons you speak
of are acually the part of you that needs
to be control they will always be a part of you waiting for your monents of weakness
so find some way of beating them.
the devil preys on sadden souls and if you
don't want to join him you got to beat him
theres not a day I don't want to get high
but once you change getting high from
having fun to numbing pain then getting high
is over.

I liked this poem a lot, and I totally understand your perception of "demons" and what they mean and how they could be a part of any person and destroy their lives, we all have a little bit of that in us but everyone has a different way of approaching pain and dealing with it. Crying is not a weakness though hun, its a different kind of release. Whatever you do to ease your pain, is your thing. No one should criticize it ever! Great poetry!

Wow! I like this one alot...