Your words are like magic.
I need that magic baby
just like I will always need you.
The words you speak mean the world to me.

^^thats something beautiful not just your words but the true poetry behind them.
the poetry of true love.

its very strong in your poem
5/5
laura

This is real love actually, how you described it. Their sweet words make you melt, you can never get angry at them.. because you love them too much, their words are like "magic" and you need them in your life forever, ect. Perfectly said!! :]
5/5.

"my heart begins to melt
for you all over again,"
-- Dislike the SECOND line, I think it needs removed. It might mess up the stanza lengths and stuff, but it is how it is, eh.

I really enjoyed this poem. You write essay like and less poetic like, I've noticed. It's your style, I get that. But every now and then you tend to go into an essay-mode instead of essay-like and it ruins it. This poem doesn't have it. But, I noticed that it was essay like and I wanted to compliment that. It's a good, unique way to write. It's almost like a poetic story. But, sometimes when I read your poems (and they're in the essay-mode) they're just like an essay. I guess essays have a LOT less rhythm to them than poems do and it's very noticeable in some of your poems, but not this one. (:

Very sweet and very true, a very captivating love poem..well done indeed!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Nice

Wow your words were very sweet and romantic.
"Your words have a power
that I can't resist.
I'm never able to stay angry
your words always calm me.
I really loved these lines. Great job 5/5

Ur very good very touching :)

I love the last sentence.
The words you speak mean the world to me.
And the whole poem.
5/5