Wow... I fell in love with this piece. I'm truly amazed.
I can relate to this poem in so many ways which made it even more powerful for me. I like the topic that you picked to write about. This poem is simply astonishing from the beginning to the end. It seems simple at first, but it holds amazing depths within every stanza.
This is one of those pieces I could re-read many times and always find another remarkable detail I haven't noticed before.
I can't pick favorite stanza, they're all equally great, but the ending is truly heartfelt, especially those three last stanzas.
Overall, greatly done.