Lover 's Paradise (Shadorma)

by Ingrid   Dec 2, 2008


Come to me
Stay with me always
I love you
forever
Into lover 's paradise
we drift together

A life time
of loving we share
Nothing else
will matter
but us for eternity,
my forever love

A dedication to my dear friend Grant Gilbert and his beloved wife Elsie.

A shadorma is a non-rhyming verse of six lines with a strict syllable count of 3,5,3,3,7,5. There can be more than one verse as long as the syllable count remains the same.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very romantic love poem and beautifully written. A joy to read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Sounds like a place i would want to go to : ) Truly genuine words! 5/5

    Good job!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Wow Ingrid this is a super gift and i'm sure my wife will love it, i do consider it a huge privalege to be able to love and cherish my sweet lady and there are few things on this planet that will ever be able to stop that.
    So from the bottom of both our hearts thank you so much for such a lovely gift

    Grant

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