I really liked this poem the emotion was very strong. The only thing I saw that you might fix is all the "the hate". You could but something else there or juat plain take most of them out. Other then that the poem was great. I gave it a 5/5.

Well, well you seems so much vexed with yourself. I think it just because you're so confused. I think as someone mention before too much 'hate', it takes away the beauty of your poem. I hope you're in a better mood now, kel. It merits 4.5/5, kel.

I hate myself in every ways
-take off the S no need to pluralize it.
I hate this life for some reasons
-take off the s in reasons no need to pluralize again.
I hate my heart seems i cant control
-I hate my heart I can't seem to control. I believe that should be it.
I hate the way i feel so alone
-capitalize the I
I hate someone who lie on me
-I hate someone who lies to me
I hate this love i feel, that cause me pain
-Causes it should be "Causes"

I hate everyday for thinking my love
-not sure. I believe "For Thinking of m love"

I hate because it feels me so down
- "Because it makes me feel so down"

I hate because my life was misery
- "I hate my life because it's misery"

and i think i cant take it anymore!
-I don't think I can take it anymore!

I apologize if I sort of chopped apart your poem, but those are the grammarical errors that really prevent you from reading a poem that I feel has a lot of raw emotion and potential in it.

This is a very well done poem if you push past all the errors that are done with this.

5/5

Ways = way
on = to OR about
cause = causes

"I hate because it drive me crazy

I hate because it feels me so down"

[ I hate it because it's driving me crazy.
I hate it because it's making me down]

"I hate because my life was misery"
[I hate it because my life is misery]

You've an amazing poem here. I do however think the grammical errors need changed. They're not horrible but they do mess with the way it portrays the feeling. You've got the poetic ways down, you just need to work on your wording (grammical ways)

I can truly relate, your poem was a nice write but im just suggesting to perhaps show some more detail to your pain^^.

I really like it. it shows true emotion. Not like the ever more written too many time The things I hate about you that is always done in ten. lol. I think you have wonderful talent. keep it up, 5/5

Aaron