by Brittany C
Good poem. It was kind of sad. The wording was perfect. I gave it a 5/5. Everything was great. |
by kelleyana
A sad poem but at the end there's hope. The emotion were well expressed, i like it, kel. |
by Hollymariee
This is perfect . Flow , rhymes , everything . The imagery is what i loved the most , because I could really see what you were trying to put out . 5/5 for sure , and one of my favorite poems . Very well done . |
Hiya! =) |
I realley love it when a dark poem ends with a positve mysticism |
by Minkus
4/5. It was good, but not excellent. "pushes me with violence = very awkward phrasing, sounds very forced. I like that you vary your rhyme scheme in different poems. I believe I understand the literal story and I think there's probably an extended metaphor going on here, with that story just symbolizing how your love raised you when you thought you were a goner (i.e. depressed.) However, as always, more specifics will help the reader feel more involved. Keep it up! |