by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Dec 3, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Melancholy pondering thoughts of my mistrust. |
by Faithless
This poem is totally remarkable...fading in with a description of innocent people then slowly showing how these people are being brain washed and ends with the protaginist's order. You must have put a lot of thoughts to pull off a poem like this. I just read one of your other dark poems earlier and it kindda seems to me that dark poems seems to be your forte |
by Krista
Jen this is very good. I agree with TJ, it was amazing.The fact that it is about sucide makes me kinda sad, but it gives me insight on the topic. |