Jen this is very good. I agree with TJ, it was amazing.The fact that it is about sucide makes me kinda sad, but it gives me insight on the topic.
Very nice job.
Peace, Love && Pixie Dust

This poem is totally remarkable...fading in with a description of innocent people then slowly showing how these people are being brain washed and ends with the protaginist's order. You must have put a lot of thoughts to pull off a poem like this. I just read one of your other dark poems earlier and it kindda seems to me that dark poems seems to be your forte

Great job
5/5 from me