Nature at it's best.

This is a good poem, the first I've ever read on this site. You've mastered my belief that simplicity is bliss. The only thing holding me back on loving this is that, in my opinion, the rhyming actually takes away from it.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

Hi!
=)

"Rosemary eyes wander winded oceans.
"Bestill!" They claim from east to west,
for no other shall see the earth this way.
'Tis a delightful setting; nature at it's best."

-- Wow. Someone get me an oxygen mask.
I've ran out of air! LOL.
This is such a beautiful poem. I loved it from the first word to the last. Is it so descriptive and the imagery created is unbelievable!
I also loved how you put in "Nature at it's best" as the title and also as the final words of the poem. I think, from self experience, that it adds such a finish and it just adds that cherry-on-top feeling. Very well done!

Loved it! Very well done, keep up the great work!
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[5 / 5 ]

- Nicole
xox

This seems really short to be a poem .. And may be better off as a quote , but the flow is flawless and your couple of rhymes you have are as always , amazing . You write in a style close to old english , like shakespear kind of , which usually annoys me but you pull it off . A little short , but still fantastic . Another 5/5 from me .

This is breathtaking. I like poems about nature. The relaxing feeling it gives. It was short yet meaningful.

Short but very true and to the point. I find nature to beautiful at any time but there are those times that it can just your breath away. Beautiful poem. Everything about it was great. I kind of wish that it was longer but that doesn't take away from the poem at all. I gave this poem a 5/5.