Two hearts that beats as one

A very gentle touch and a very good expression i find in this poem , and i find many of your poems jsut go arround this perfect man you are having , the loving and caring and understanding one .

keys to the hearts.. how a godo expression and yet a very godo metaphorical image that really express that attraction and impact somone can mean to another , that lokk that can capture your eyes and your heart in a single look.

this was a great a very great flow and expression , but it lacked the structure and the rhyming , it was good the way you got the feelgins out an the expression in words , but i would loved if you could rhyme it or section it

if you put a whole paragraph of words the eye of the reader will jsut refuse to read no matter how good the poem is

sectioning is important ^_^_

great one again ^_^

Wonderful piece, very passionate and loving. You put feeling into the words, and each line was portrayed beautifully. I do think you need punctuation, so it reads better, that way its will look better and be easier to read. Keep writing, always and forever...

Wow this is one of the most romantic poems that I have ever read. It is so sweet and filled with thoughts and feelings of love. 5/5

Excellent poem, but it needed pnctuation. I find that strongly important for the flow to be better. I like that it was free verse. And the topic was displayed very well.

Krista

You express this poem very beautifully and very carefully, which makes it a wonderful delight to read. your romantic poems seems to be my current addiction

Well done