by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash Dec 3, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Expressions of love |
by Sourav
Interestingly well written poem. Very erotic yet graceful. Nice work! |
by Cara
Visualizing this one might be a bit awkward :P |
by Paiger
Very Beautiful :) I love the the line: into flames they ignite, it really helps start the mood for this poem, I think this line helped me start visualising, and feeling this poem myself. |
How wonderful this was. Every word chocolate sweet ^-^. You passion and love is amazing and to be able to put it to words is perfection. Grant you have penned points with your wife 100 magnified. Incredible poem |
by Ingrid
Very passionate and well written, my dear friend:) |