Wow the emotions and ur feeling were rite there. you pored ur heart here. very beautiful and very trusting. i love it. Keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Wow. that was a great poem. i can tell she means a lot to u. i'm happy for u.

Hey, yea id have to say kinda very descriptive lol. but it was good. just gonna say gotta have trust lol. ttyl peace

I dont know what to say... this poem had more emotion in it then i have seen in a long time, it was very well written and i really enjoyed reading it keep it up! 5/5

I love your poem its sweet and somehow romantic and i know how it feels to loose a loved one but through it all keep your head up

Nicely done!!! Keep on writing...!!! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

Love the flow. It remind me, lol

-not sure why I re-read this- but all I'm going to say is Thanksgiving has a whole new meaning...for two reasons. This memory for one & my son for the 2nd.