This one holds several different meanings for me...at first I thought it was about breaking the pattern and find new challenges and then suddenly death comes in to the picture and adds so much depth and a bit of terror. The last lines kind of killed of that suspense you created with that "death" line. For the first time I think you toned it down rather that explode with big words and out-of-this-world meanings.

Still, you've got this amazing gift and you can write a wonderful and meaningful poem and acctually make me feel something, sitting here half across the world away. (and it's not even your best work!)

You're amazingly talented and I've got so much to learn from you. Every time you post a new wave of poems I feel like I've rediscovered the path home or something like that. You put all these new ideas in my head everytime you log on and I thank you for it:)

Have a good weekend!