Heart Ache (Triquint)

by Sylvia   Dec 3, 2008


Words written in verses, they appeal.
Sung about in songs you feel.
Heart Ache, all to real.
Ne'er ideal.
Hears.

Emotions which are hard to conceal.
Feelings that are so surreal.
Heart Ache, all to real.
Ne'er ideal.
Tears.

Beliefs that if you were to reveal,
would cause pain too hard to heal.
Heart Ache, all to real.
Ne'er ideal.
Fears.

Copyright © 2008 Sylvia All Rights Reserved
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Triquint - (Invented by Sylvia) Three verses, five lines each. Lines 3 and 4 verse 1 (Refrain) repeat in verses 2 and 3. Syllable count 9,7,5,3,1.

Rhyme scheme aaAAb (Capital Letters Refrain, Repeated Lines) - The last word in lines 1,2,3,4 each verse rhyme and line 5 each verse rhymes.

Variation: Lines 4 and 5 verse 1 (Refrain repeat in verses 2 and 3. Rhyme scheme abcDE (Capital Letters Refrain/Repeated Lines).
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  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This form is different and interesting..have to
    try it. Some feel by hiding they can be spared
    from heart aches..but that hiding itself will
    cause more heart ache..liked the message
    in this poem..take care.