Hey, I really like this! I just realized that its an acrostic after I read it...physics homework fried my brain today...but it sounded great, acrostics are so hard to write! I could definitely see the emotion in this poem too, great job 5/5.

Great poem. I liked it. The wording was great. I gave it a 5/5.

Wow seriously every line of yours was given careful thoughts in it...it metaphorically depicts the on going event.I'm really mesmerized by your words even though the poem holds a dark theme

Excellent work
5/5 from me