Wow. you have a little shakespear in the beginning, everything about Cinderella and it seems like at the end its like a Romeo and Juliet thing. This was very interesting, I kinda got lost in some of it, but other then that, I really did enjoy reading this =]

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Uhm....Wow!

I'm quite literally speechless, there are some reaaally strong emotions here that you have captivated beautifully! This is a great piece of work, I'm glad it's featured.

Cya around,
Emilyy :)

This is extraordinary. Although it has some of the bland content of much of the teen poetry on here (razorblades, suicide, and isolation) you've portrayed the central characters in such a way that it's not easy to see where the poem is going to end, once you get going. All in all this makes for quite a captivating read, even if the outcome is perhaps revealing of age more than you may have intended. Very interesting!

OMGG i love it!! so amazing!!!