by kate Dec 4, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
So I sit here crying about you. |
Doing good |
Wow indeed a sad poem, i can relate, though saw more of a story than a poem within your write which is not bad^^ |
Hiya! =) |
by Teria
Overall you did a good job. It's one of those poems that you read over and over. BUT, you made it your own. And, cliche is never bad. Many people think it is.. but in reality it's not. It's just proving that everyone has the same emotions to a point. poetry doesn't have to be 'original' or a 'non-cliche' it just has to be your own. And, that's what this poem is. |
by kelleyana
Very sad indeed, yet positive because although you knew this person is not of help, yet you seek help. I hope those memories are just in the past, well don, it merits a 5/5, kel. |