A note to a friend

by keithnwv   Dec 4, 2008


A Note To A Friend

Just writing down my thoughts
And sending them to you
I hope that you don't mind
Although some out there still do

The last time that we talked
You said that you had slipped
I think i understand
My heart felt like it ripped

When we were allowed to talk
You mentioned your thoughts to me
How day by day you struggle
With stuff you should let be

Don't think you are alone
We all have fought the fight
To not give in to things
Deep down we know aren't right

Many a mistake I've made
As my life has rolled on
And many more I'll make
Before from this life I'm gone

Please know that I am here
Just like I've always been
I'll do my very best
To be there for you, My friend.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Another great write from you... I love friendship poems :) And enjoyed reading this! Your a very impressive poet :) who writes with feeling and skill...

    Well done! and take care,
    Olwin.

  • 15 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    Great poem...

  • 15 years ago

    by June

    That was a very sweet poem ,never give up your writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by mrsmoore

    Wonderful Poem. You seem like a perfect friend. Well expressed. You seem very understanding from this poem as well. Great work. Keep writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is what real friendship means. This think this person is lucky to have a friend like you, that is always present to help when there are needs for. I'm sure this person is flattered by your kind words of friendship. I can feel from your poem that you'd a kind heart. great write, 5/5, kel.

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