She falls
and she breaks
its her tears, you awaite
and she cries
and she screams
and she dies as she bleeds
This is beautiful . I love it . Seriously , keep it up . Another 5/5

Keep it up, this is a beautiful poem.

Wow, gave me chills! Loved it, your writing is amazing too!! 5/5 no doubt about it

I think that was really good ._. actually. Great job and keep up the amazing work!