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by stella Dec 4, 2008 category : Love, romance / lost love
Im sorry im not perfect that im not elegant and smart im sorry im not her that she's everything im not. im sorry that i love you and that you wont leave my mind im sorry i dont hate you that your memory keeps me preoccupied. im sorry for acting the way that i did im sorry for being irrational but i was just a kid. im sorry for everything but mostly for losing your trust im sorry for thinking- for you there was no love; just lust.
by Hollymariee
That your memory keeps me preoccupied. That i can't leave you behind . ^^ that rhymes and flows better with your poem : ) The flow is really off in your third stanza , and your last stanza isn't really a strong finish . Theres some work to be done but good job , 5/5 !