by xo kisses xo Dec 5, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I thought this time was different |
by Mandy
I love you Becca. |
by Dan
I gotta agree with my asian brotha Josh. Heartache does suck but it does help people write amazingly pieces of poetry. Keep on going as a writer. |
Ohh LOVE it. and yupp the second part of ur poem the awesome. lol. |
Thats awsome! |
by Simply Josh
Yeahh heart ache is a hard thing to take but hey it makes a great fuel to write with :) I can relate to this but obviously from the guy's point of view hehe. Keep writing and if I could suggest something...it'd be that maybe if you just wanted to get a point across...perhaps break from the rhyming scheme and just say what you want to say without constrictions :) great job |