Trying to forget.

by xo kisses xo   Dec 5, 2008


I thought this time was different
But everythings the same.
You played me so bad
It's like i was just a game.

You made me fall in love with you
And left me just as quick.
Why'd you break my heart?
You're such an effin d**k.

I want you to feel the hurt
And the pain you put me through.
The heart ache and tears
Not knowing what to do.

Once, you meant the world to me
I thought everything was set.
Now you're just a memory
I'm trying to forget.

line 8 isn't the exact way i wrote it
because the thing wouldn't let me
post it with inappropriate language.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mandy

    I love you Becca.
    and i'm so happy that jerk is out of your life forever.
    you're an amazing poet and i wish you would write more often because i miss them.
    you're who got me into poetry and i would have never been the same without it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dan

    I gotta agree with my asian brotha Josh. Heartache does suck but it does help people write amazingly pieces of poetry. Keep on going as a writer.

    -Dan

  • 16 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    Ohh LOVE it. and yupp the second part of ur poem the awesome. lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by somethinglikethat

    Thats awsome!
    ive been in that same situation many times
    with the same guy everytime. i know your probably thinking why put youself through that so many times, but i honestly dont know.

    anyways. its really good.
    but like the other comment said, just dont try to ryhme so much, just let it some out.
    kind of like word vomit. hehe.
    \-good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Yeahh heart ache is a hard thing to take but hey it makes a great fuel to write with :) I can relate to this but obviously from the guy's point of view hehe. Keep writing and if I could suggest something...it'd be that maybe if you just wanted to get a point across...perhaps break from the rhyming scheme and just say what you want to say without constrictions :) great job

    cheers, josh

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