WOW...amazing.....Full of emotion and melancholy. the haunting sadness and sorrow reach out, and paint a beautiful, sad piece of art. simply amazing. your diction was mesmerizing and to the point. i could tell apart the three characters and your struggle to stay sane. Lovely, twisted and Unique. keep it up!

**Ada**
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

Still amazing as ever

Yes this is unique it really sticks with the reader. It is creative and inventive and it is amazing. Your use of words and style and flow is amazing. There is a story that is so clearly written. I must say this story is immaculate the overall piece is outstanding. Your voice is strong, as is the entire piece. I had high expectations before reading this and still you surpassed them by so much. Excellent as usual