Better than any haiku I'll ever write. I normally don't read haiku, nor do i write them. I like to tell a story.

But I think this was pretty fruckin good, it gave a simple picture and left room for the imagination

The first 2 lines are great!!!! I loved them especially becuase they naturally ryhmed with eachother but the last line is completely random..I don't really get it...Other than that It was pretty good