by Maddy Dec 5, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Life is full of too much stress. |
by Sylvia
Sadness turns to a hopeful outlook. I am glad for the last verse in your poem, the others were so sad and this one shows you have hope for the future. Good Job. 5/5 |
I really loved this poem, it was written in your perspective.. which I loved cause I knew your feelings and such were true throughout. I found this something I could connect to myself. My life is always full of so much stress because of many reasons.. and stress often leads to that pessimistic attitude.. yet.. you know you should be more optimistic about things.. but sometimes all the stress buliding up doesnt always allow that, does it? I totally knew where you were coming from in this poem. The line that I thought was so true was.. when you were talking about getting your braces on and how your doctor told you.. "It only gets worse before it gets better." That quote is so very true.. try to live by it. :] Some things will get worse before they get better.. its only how life goes. |