Wonderful poem, nice work my friend. :)

I am so angry for all this people who was involved to this bomb attacks. Beware, God is Almighty and he is the Creator and Destroyer. Who makes Him angry has no hope of afterlife.

In the case anyone is interested I left a link to some view about who was behind this all. This is interesting article, I wish you have some minutes to read it...

http://www.globalresearch.ca/index.php?context=va&aid=11217

Take care,
Noor

I followed this incident on the news and could never imagine living from day to day with the threat of attacks like this. My prayers are with the people of India, the victims, the wounded, the surviors. I pray that someday this evil is removed from the world.

Good question the answer is no one not even our God. They may have given us the power to forgive and forget but also to feel pain and that is always just below the surface in our minds.

A very beautiful and chilling write, dear lady...
When will it ever stop, this circle of violence?
It is good to write about these subjects..they should be brought into bright daylight and condemned openly for all times and hopefully then we will learn one day..

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

5/5. You have an impressive knack for well-varied rhymes that don't compromise or limit the poem, but instead enhance it. You varied the rhyme scheme, going from a-a-a-a in the first stanza to b-c-b-c in the next two, which was fun to read. The only thing I would say is that even though you have a knack for rhyme, you may want to try some free verse poems without it and see how they turn out, just as an experiment. Great job again!

I really like your style and i would like to write this way subte rhyme with extraordinary flow

A haunting piece and a horrific tragedy. My heart goes out to the families who lost a loved one in such senseless acts of violence. You did a great job on the poem. The flow and word choice are good. May you and your family remain safe.

Congrats, a righteous win, dear lady!

Hugs,

Ingrid

"but for a while" - but only for a while
maybe? yes.. no? i think so. haha

I love this poem. I think it's easily related to in more ways than just the bombing, which is horribly devasting. I feel for the people who have lost loved ones ... even ones who weren't loved ones, but somehow known. It's a great poem, darling. I think that you wrote it well and it's heartfelt. The punctuation I'd mentioned before, is definitely not as bad in this poem. I'd say add it in a few places but not hardly at all, and I mean not hardly. 1 .. .maybe 2 periods/commas.

Amazing write.

I watched everything on my tv screen and i still could feel everything as it hpnd in front of me. It was a slap felt by every indian and now the politicians are feeling the same heat.

Great poem dear, you did potrayed everything.

all the best and take care

I am glad that you won, more people should read & rise against terror acts.

Very nice write. a fitting dedictation to a horrible tragedy. 5/5 all the best wishes ben thompson

This is soo sad. i hate how one thing is here and the next. its gone. but i love this poem. 5/5

Like the rest of the world I too was shocked and horrorfied to see such atrocities commited by mankind against another.
It is a sad and grim reminder of how far human has strayed from God.
Your dedication though a sad one, speaks volume of the pain endure by those who perish and those who survived.
A sad yet beautiful dedication.Take care and keep up the great work.
Paul...

A somber touching poem to the victims of this unspeakable crime and all the victims of terrorism. Terrorism is a bloodthirsty monster. Seeing this last year filled me with rage. The pathetic cowards that do these deeds for whatever twisted causes they invent are the enemies of mankind and of life itself. May karma and justice overtake all the world's terrorists as soon as possible!!!!

Amazing write 5/5