Your style of writing is unique, I guess thats the only good thing I see in it. But there's no flow in your poems, so theres not much I can really say. The flow needs to be tweaked and improved, you have some issues with your words they didnt show up correctly which isnt your fault but the reader cannot read what it's supposed to say, I think that again.. the main thing you can do is make your lines the same length.. otherwise I dont see how youre going to make it flow. Hm. This wasnt my favorite, sorry. Dont mean to sound harsh or bash your poem at all.. but I think it needs improvement.. Your thinking is very unique and original though, thank you for sharing your thoughts..

"Is ,life really so supernatural?"
- No need for the comma.

When you copy and paste stuff into Poems and Quotes it puts in all those weird things, so it's better to type. I know this is long so you can just go through and take them out. But they really take away

The poem is well written, and though I don't believe the 'ornot' part, I believe it's all true - it's definitely relatable. Everyone who's ever though of God or any higher power has wondered this. Even people who haven't thought of God but of ancestors and all that, have thought of the 'or not' factor. You wrote it really well. I enjoyed the read (: