Single Rose

by Crystal Rose Blooming   Dec 5, 2008


Single rose in a crystal vase
Lonely dewdrop tears glisten
Vibrant colors fade to pale

No longer kissed by the sun
Clouds blanket her world
Petals droop in sadness

Love; the waters of life
Evaporated from her world
Thirsting, she slowly dies

Drops of life touch her face
Drinking in the nourishment
Sweet taste of his pure love

Passion, love and tenderness
Now fill her vacant failing heart
Crystal vase now occupied by two

*To my sweet breath of life*
******* Karan******
********I LOVE YOU

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow Crystal this was just so beautiful! Your use of imagery just blew me away and the descriptions were very effective in getting the message across. The emotion expressed felt so real I know came straight from your heart.

    This deserves my vote for the weekly contest.
    Well done!
    *5/5*
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Awww tts was really sweet of you...the poem was magnificent using the metaphor of a rose in a vase, itz just breath taking

    5/5 from me;)

  • 16 years ago

    by alina

    This is so cute i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Hey this poem is great. i love the use of imagery, you wer able to giv the reader soo much depth from short and precise lines. this is a tribute to ur diversity and skill as a poet. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by jess and cait

    THAT WAS THE MOST SUCKIEST THING I HAVE EVER READ CAN YOU DO ANY BETTER

    NEGATIVE 1000 000/5

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