First, I would take the "I know it sucks" off the bottom of the poem, otherwise someone might want to believe you, second of all i like how you worded your poem, you may have written it on the spot but the poems that just come to you are usually the ones that show the most emotion, they are somewhat raw yet always draw the reader in the most. I enjoyed your comparison between you and the broken phone, it gave a good visual. Thank you for the read. 5/5

Yours truly complex :)

BROKEN PHONE!!!! Love it!
That is a great analogy! If you need anything feel free to message me.