by Teria Dec 6, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
She loved a lot in her time. [SONG] |
by Minkus
5/5. This was simply excellent. The one single change I would suggest is to change the "strife" rhyme in the second verse... "strife" is a terrible mouse trap ("cheesy"... mouse... get it? :P.) You could just get rid of the rhyme there altogether, or whatever. Just a suggestion. Great job. |