by Teria Dec 6, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
LUCILLE |
Wow, I cannot say much about this, other than Wow. This touched me, in a way more then most, the "My Darling" i know was to show the deep feelings you have for this person, but for me, it was unnecessary, now, you don't have to change it, for it doesn't take much from the poem, but I would if i were you. |
by Lonely Rider
Well written... deep and at some point its touching ... at some places I liked the words you have used to express the emotions ... |
This poem is very original yet it brings to mind a line from a song they said she died easy from a broken heart disease |