Such a wonderful poem! What drew my attention in this poem is one important thing! Yes. We usually find that people don't remember Allah (God) but in hard times but here i'm very happy to find u remembering Him in ur happiest time ;) that's really what i like in people..
ur a very talented poetess 5/5

Care, you gave me the christmas fever that i want to transmits around the house and also the the ones i love. Reading outside while reading your poem and see the sparkle of tiny snow drops makes me return to my childhood days. You said it all. Never will those special memories fades away. Well done. 5/5, kel.

What a feel good poem, girlie!
You captured the sentiments of Christmas really well:)
Thanks for sharing, I can hear the sleigh bells already now, lol!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Awww you really described Christmas in such a beautiful way. The rhyme and flow were great. It was so cute. 5/5

Cara i think you captured the Christmas spirit perfectly, and most importantly you didn't forget it's about christs birthday.
It's so true what you say of how people are drawn together by Christmas day but its also so sad. All in all this was a lovely very well written poem
Keep up the good work

Grant

This is awesome, i love christmas, you captured just exactly what it means Wonderful x

Lol, great poem, sorry, you may not like your poems, but I'm an optomist, and this is a 5/5 poem, reminds me of my poem "My Decemeber"