by kelleyana
"Harsh words can hurt and kind words heal |
Such a true write, this really does speak the truth. You did an amazing job, the flow was flawless, and your word choice was great as well. |
by Ria
It's a nice poem,but it made it really difficult for me to keep up in the end,I think the number of words in each line in the last stanza needs your attention |
by Teria
"Yet egocentric people are easy to bruise |