Omg.... This is well written... I totally give you 5/5. Awesome poem. :)

Wow! i really love this poem. it makes you wonder why he wont go for his dreams when he wants them so badly...only to find out that hes being held back. 5/5

I want to be better also, I want to be better than everyone I've ever know said I could be. But I also cannot find the strength to get up off my feet and leave this life behind. I wish it was easier, for you and I both and eveyone else in the world that takes away their pain by cutting, drugs and alcohol, I really do.
That was beautifully written, I really liked it.
5/5, Nice work