Lol I liked this MUCHO!

WoW! i really like this. say a lot of things to me. like you care whatz underneath her skin.
this is my favorite part i don't know why. it just is.

whats this
her true place
it not in her face, or chin... its
under her skin...

Great job here. Please do Keep it up! i'll be reading on.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Wow, this was a very unique poem. I've never read anything like this. I really liked it. Its a bit dark sided, but that's the point. You really got to where you were going.

5/5

ashley