Only God( contest )

by Crystal Rose Blooming   Dec 6, 2008


Moonbeams dance off ocean waters
Nocturnal fog swirls around me
Stars spark celestial embers
I call to heaven hear my plea
My love bring to me set me free
Fog horns sound loneliness consume
Only God can make that decree
Grant my prayer lift this lovers gloom

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  • 14 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Lovely!!! I like the thought in here... captivating!!! Thanks for writing such piece. Let me also pray for your desire. God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Oooo, this was a nifty one. I really liked it. It had a certain air of power. It was feirce, and true. The words you used were brilliant and the title fit well with the poem. It hinted on what the poem was about, then when you read the poem it's like whoaa metaphor decypering time! It was really good. Five out of five. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The desire to be with the one your heart longs for can be so overwhelming..you said it so beautifully, Crystal:)
    Karan is a very sweet young man, I think you made a really good choice with him;)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

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