The desire to be with the one your heart longs for can be so overwhelming..you said it so beautifully, Crystal:)
Karan is a very sweet young man, I think you made a really good choice with him;)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Oooo, this was a nifty one. I really liked it. It had a certain air of power. It was feirce, and true. The words you used were brilliant and the title fit well with the poem. It hinted on what the poem was about, then when you read the poem it's like whoaa metaphor decypering time! It was really good. Five out of five. :]

Lovely!!! I like the thought in here... captivating!!! Thanks for writing such piece. Let me also pray for your desire. God bless you!!!

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