Love Always

This is so beautifully wriiten on so many levels though tragic. you render heartfelt greif with the crowing touch of bereavent that was a great tribute to you loved one
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My world,it's spinning,
Tears begin to pour,
My body loses control,
As the pain fills me.
^^great portrayl of your feelings here you give us a real good idea of what is going on with you!

Why you?Why God?Why?
I'm just so angry,
The rage consumes me,
As I weep uncontrollably.
^^aw....God has a reason for everything he does most of the time it makes absolutely no sense to us why he is doing what he is doing but there is a reason and one day we will get all of our questions answered from him we just have to have faith in him..

You didn't even get a chance,
And neither did you're parents,
A house up in flames,
Is all the neighbors could see.
^^thats so sad honestly i could never imagine going through that or seeing someone close have to heartbreaking...

You're smiling face,
That laugh of yours,
You're dark brown eyes,
It's all gone now.
^^You never really have to say goodbye! you can have them live on through your memories and stories of them they always would want you to remember them in a happy way...one day you will meet up with them again..

You're not here anymore,
To comfort us,
And make us smile,
Like I know you'd want us to,
^^it just pulls on the readers heart strings!

I never thought twice,
When we said goodbye,
I wish I would've hugged you,
And held you in a final embrace.
^^my nanna died recently and suddenly i can relate to all those things running through your head that you wished you had done

Now I can only look to the sky,
Wondering if you're looking down,
We need you here, We miss you.
Love always.
^^this stanza reminds me of these lyrics " Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you, I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you, holding you
Tonight" i dont know if that helped but i hope it did!

R.I.P. Charlie 4/17/91-12/5/08
We were so lucky to have you while we did.
We'll never forget you love!
May angels lead you in.
^^i am sure they did : )

you did an amazing job with the poem honestly!! i loved it 5/5 ! i will keep you guys in my prayers: )

All that I can say is this poem reflects honest emotion about a very tragic event my thoughts and prayers are with all who are bereaved

Aww.. this is so sad. made me want to cry. im so sorry. what happen. but idk what to say. sorry.
btw the poem was really nice n very sad. remember the memories.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy