Aww.. this is so sad. made me want to cry. im so sorry. what happen. but idk what to say. sorry.
btw the poem was really nice n very sad. remember the memories.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

All that I can say is this poem reflects honest emotion about a very tragic event my thoughts and prayers are with all who are bereaved

My world,it's spinning,
Tears begin to pour,
My body loses control,
As the pain fills me.
^^great portrayl of your feelings here you give us a real good idea of what is going on with you!

Why you?Why God?Why?
I'm just so angry,
The rage consumes me,
As I weep uncontrollably.
^^aw....God has a reason for everything he does most of the time it makes absolutely no sense to us why he is doing what he is doing but there is a reason and one day we will get all of our questions answered from him we just have to have faith in him..

You didn't even get a chance,
And neither did you're parents,
A house up in flames,
Is all the neighbors could see.
^^thats so sad honestly i could never imagine going through that or seeing someone close have to heartbreaking...

You're smiling face,
That laugh of yours,
You're dark brown eyes,
It's all gone now.
^^You never really have to say goodbye! you can have them live on through your memories and stories of them they always would want you to remember them in a happy way...one day you will meet up with them again..

You're not here anymore,
To comfort us,
And make us smile,
Like I know you'd want us to,
^^it just pulls on the readers heart strings!

I never thought twice,
When we said goodbye,
I wish I would've hugged you,
And held you in a final embrace.
^^my nanna died recently and suddenly i can relate to all those things running through your head that you wished you had done

Now I can only look to the sky,
Wondering if you're looking down,
We need you here, We miss you.
Love always.
^^this stanza reminds me of these lyrics " Tonight I've fallen and I can't get up
I need your loving hands to come and pick me up
And every night I miss you, I can just look up
And know the stars are
Holding you, holding you, holding you
Tonight" i dont know if that helped but i hope it did!

R.I.P. Charlie 4/17/91-12/5/08
We were so lucky to have you while we did.
We'll never forget you love!
May angels lead you in.
^^i am sure they did : )

you did an amazing job with the poem honestly!! i loved it 5/5 ! i will keep you guys in my prayers: )

This is so beautifully wriiten on so many levels though tragic. you render heartfelt greif with the crowing touch of bereavent that was a great tribute to you loved one
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