Comments : Clouds ( Huitain)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Made me wish I was indeed laying in the sun watching clouds today and everyday. Lovely images. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    I could almost smell the grass lol. Another lovely write. Your imagery is marvelous

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    oh how this takes me back to my childhood, to the carefree days spent lying in grassy meadows, enjoying the warmth of the sun, listening to far off aircraft and yes, imagining shapes in clouds. An elephant, a funny face...oh and over there, look a person bending over revealing a peachy bottom! Ha ha

    Well done on this form and this wonderful poem full of imagery, literally!!

    *hugs*

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Waw you creates a relaxing atmosphere in my mind. One that takes me back in warm spring. I enjoy my read, keep it up, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I agree with Kelleyana...this poem juz makes you want to relax and and be at a state of a peaceful mind...wonderful picture that you have depicted with your words

    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5. I feel everyone can relate to this beautiful piece of poetry.Our imagination goes wild while watching the clouds.Great work.Keep it up.God bless.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tony

    It was so nice to read this on a chilly English winter afternoon, took me back to a sunny afternoon in August. Delightful.

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    What a lovely poem Ingrid, your words reminding us all that all we need for total happiness can be found all around us, if only so many souls the world over, would understand this.
    Your words hopefully will be heeded by those who strive instead for a greedy and unhappy, unkind world.