This poem is pretty sweet :D It's got a very light, but somehow nervous feeling.
fifth stanza 'turns' instead of 'turn'
sixth: 'seems' instead of 'seem' silly English things, still good though :D
'your imaginary yet naked body' sounds kind of funny to me, I can't place what though.
This would make a great song :D
'lord, let me give you a piece of advice:
if you try to convince me you exist,
this is not the way to go.'
I absolutely LOVE this line, being the philosopher that I am :D
I love the first set of them to, I think those ones are the best.
The ending deserves the title, and I lvoes this :D