As I Watch the Sky

by Unrequited   Dec 8, 2008


I feel it all, bare and frosted
when chill-boned birds
streak away from whitened fields-
to an underworld
they noisily flow
from angry tundras
and to the sea.

for the sun is calling
to those that listen.
but we have no courage
like that of fowl,
so let's wait to begin
again, once
our spring appears.

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**I think this one needs help, so I welcome suggestions. :)

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I agree i dnt think theres nothing wrong with it. i think it's perfect how it is. i can image the sea and sun. but in my image the sunset before my eyes. the ocean wide and open. =) what a beautiful sight to see. never saw it but i would love to tho.. hehe.. i love it. dnt change it. it just right. keep it up!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem. It is very true. I liked everything about it and saw nothing wrong. 5/5

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