I liked this poem. It is very true. I liked everything about it and saw nothing wrong. 5/5

I agree i dnt think theres nothing wrong with it. i think it's perfect how it is. i can image the sea and sun. but in my image the sunset before my eyes. the ocean wide and open. =) what a beautiful sight to see. never saw it but i would love to tho.. hehe.. i love it. dnt change it. it just right. keep it up!

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy