Awww...those last few lines, Tabi...so heartbreaking:(
You know..some men don't see what they have until it's way too late. My advice to you is to be very open about how you feel about him, if he says he cannot return the feeling then move on sweetheart..however difficult that may be. Some men are just afraid to make a commitment and too many beautiful young girls have waisted their years away thinking it would eventually all turn out alright;)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

I can relate to that a lot.however if he knows how you feel inside & doesn't wanna give the same back its jus hurting you,not him.look out for yourself hun.
beautifully written poem.thanks for doing mine. =]
deff. 5/5
lexie

Nice write! I enjoyed reading this...very interesting--especially the last phrase...very uniquely written! Great job & Merry Christmas =)
5/5!
-Amanda

"You always play
from the sidelines.
Afraid to get involved,
missing all the signs."
I really got drawn in!

"The person you love
will never love you back.
Things never can
actually stay on track."
Wow, I can really relate to that! Great job!

Excellent rhyme and flow reminds me of one I used to know