This was an awsome peom I'm adding it to my favorites.... the description was beautiful and the idea quite original i can honestly say i feel similar.... 5/5

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i know i haven't commented in a while, ryssa...and i'm sorry for that :(

I adore this piece. It makes me think of having an imaginary place to run away to...somewhere that you can be safe and yourself. but the issue is, paper is fragile. it gets wet and dirty and torn...

you're beautiful, sissy. let me see your paper town more often..

5/5

I loved the concept. I'm not sure if it came across the way you intended it to or not. I thought it was very confusing. Not the poem itself, just that fact that it was both complicated and simplistic at the same time. It was beautiful, and in a way, very hard to read. Nicely done.

Love it!
Its amazing
x

This takes me back to a book I read. I think it was the Wizard of Oz, the book. In there was a tiny town of china people. as in china glass. they would fall, and get chipped. 5/5 on this poem, and thnx for the comment. greatly apprieciated.
AJ