That made me cry. life hurts. that is a great poem

Insanity is not a sinn,
the real world is this hard,
but no matter how hard it beats us down,
you are still o so stronge.

Good read/write keep it up

You are not the mistake. they should of never told you that. this is an amazing poem. just keep ya head held high and don't let any thing bother you. just brush off all the negative things people say to you

Look ur not a mistake i thought i was too. but i took control of my life and im happy. u r who u r and no one can change that. this was an good poem^.^

Cool poem... loved it!
It's sad at the end, but at least you have hope and a strong sense that someday you will see yourself in that way.
The way I see it you are that girl in the mirror beautiful strong and loving, anyone could tell by reading that poem.