"Tick, tock. Tick, tock.
Sounds of incessant ticking,
fill my lonely ears.
Yearning for a different song,
leaning myself into a brighter light."
Enchanting opening paragraph, I like how you use the word "incessant" for ticking, it had a great affect, and I love your style of writing and this was an interesting and enjoyable write to read. Nice job! Keep writing, always and forever...5/5 from me...take care