My Christmas Wish (Shadorma)

by Ingrid   Dec 9, 2008


Please dear God
I have one request:
heal my friend,
my friend Grant
It 's my only Christmas wish
Please Lord, grant him this!

My dear friend Grant Gilbert has hurt his left eye pretty badly. Please, all who read this: pray for his recovery. Prayers can move mountains!

A shadorma is a non-rhyming verse of six lines with a strict syllable count of 3,5,3,3,7,5. There can be more than one verse as long as the syllable count remains the same.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Please dear God<<i seriously loved that you capitalized God so many people do not and do not understand why it matters!

    I have one request:<<questions popping in our minds always keep the reader involved!! : )

    heal my friend,<<aww whats wrong?!

    my friend Grant<<hmm..

    It 's my only Christmas wish<<aw so innocent..

    Please Lord, grant him this!<<a perfectly legit cry for help!!

    I will keep him in my prayers : ) no one should be hurt on Jesus's birthday!! I think God will definitely heal him but in his time and according to his will !
    5/5 you do a great job with these types of poems that have structure !

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Thanks sweetie tht was very kind of you and im sure all will be well especially after all the prayers and wishes from you guys
    Huge HUGS

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I will keep Grant in my prayers and pray that he is healed and okay.

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