Comments : You're Rubbing Salt In My Wounds

  • 16 years ago

    by Freckles

    I watched every single step that you took.
    Not once did you turn around, not even for a simple look.

    I love this. well written.
    And I can totally relate to this right now.
    keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    First of all...congrats on the win! Very well deserved.

    The emotions you expressed here felt so real and truly brought the poem to life for me. You took this title and just made it your own which stood out and caught my eye. Great use of language and the flow was just flawless. Heartbreakingly beautiful write.

    "Off and on, you played the game.
    But on me, you placed all blame."
    ^I loved how you worded this and its so true.

    *5/5*