Healing Mind

by Vox   Dec 9, 2008


I walk in a world of pain,
Feeling its weight on my head,
I look around me,
Seeing the pain of the dead.

The others around me,
Have secrets to hide,
Not letting it loose,
Trying not to confide.

All through the streets,
The cries of children rise,
But most keep on walking,
Living in their own lies.

If theres one thing to learn,
It is to rise up above,
To heal all this pain,
And to show others love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Good write...

    "The others around me,
    Have secrets to hide,
    Not letting it loose,
    Trying not to confide."

    ^^ I liked this stanza... very true...

    one typo
    If theres one thng to learn,
    thng=thing

    keep writing..

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "If theres one thng to learn,"
    `thing

    Simply written. I thought your flow and rhyme was pretty good.. your message was strong and in the end was remphasized and was put out there for the readers to see. Perfectly done. I saw nothing wrong with this. I loved your advice and thought process that went into this poem.

    Good message.
    5/5.

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